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Haven Mods ([personal profile] havenmods) wrote in [community profile] havenooc2014-06-27 11:52 pm
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HMD


It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

For feedback on the characters you play, just post a comment here and other players will respond. Useful things to include in your comment are: character name, canon and how long they've been in Haven, as well as any specific notes you might want feedback on. Although the HMD is not mandatory for this game, it is highly encouraged.

While it's always nice to get praise, try not to spam the meme with 'I LOVE YOU' comments. Leaving positive comments is definitely allowed, but try to frame it as: 'I like this about the character because of...'. This is the same for constructive criticism; comments of just 'YOU SUCK' help no-body. Try to back up criticism with examples and keep the tone polite. Similarly, when responding to criticism, try not to dismiss it out of hand.

Anonymous is enabled, and if there are any problems then please PM the mod account and they'll be taken care of ASAP.
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Wan | Avatar/The Legend of Korra

[personal profile] raavashing 2014-06-27 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Been in game a little over a month now. Wan's a relatively new voice and I'm confident in him, but feedback is appreciated. If there's anything you think I'm doing wrong, voice issues I can fix now before they get to a point I can't easily retcon, general notes, etc, hearing back on them would be great.

Thanks!
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Danni

[personal profile] crownless 2014-06-27 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Travis Touchdown | No More Heroes | [personal profile] crownless
Tony Chu | Chew | [personal profile] cibopath

I know I just got here and haven't gotten to posting a lot with either of them yet, but Travis' character development from the last time around has definitely changed the way I play him a lot! I'm mostly worried about whether this is happening organically or not... Both of them also have private HMDs on their journal if you'd prefer. Thanks for any crit in advance, you guys <:
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Li

[personal profile] denyamenti 2014-06-27 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Yami no Bakura | Yuugiou: Duel Monsters | [personal profile] denyamenti

→ He's been in Haven since mid April but May and June were crazybusy IRL because of temp job I picked up. I should be more active and involved going forward!
Edited 2014-06-27 23:08 (UTC)
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James

[personal profile] tooshallpass 2014-06-27 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Nadia Sullivan | Original | [personal profile] tooshallpass | Personal HMD
Been in Haven since March 2014!
Edited 2014-06-27 23:11 (UTC)
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Kaiya

[personal profile] ishotyouuu 2014-06-27 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Deadpool | Marvel Comics | [profile] ishotyouu
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Dana

[personal profile] uncalled 2014-06-27 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Sakon Shima || Sengoku BASARA || [personal profile] uncalled

Just this one! I know that I've been gone a lot this month which honestly is a little OOC because Sakon is rarely this quiet but well, life called. If you have any advice at all, it's be greatly appreciated. If you want to leave crit elsewhere, there's a private HMD on his journal!
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Auria

[personal profile] deereintheheadlights 2014-06-27 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Ib // Ib // [personal profile] roseinyourheart
Been in Haven a year and a half

Megumi Shimizu // Shiki // [personal profile] deereintheheadlights
Just showed up

Tags have been a little slow over the week, sorry.
Edited 2014-06-27 23:10 (UTC)
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[personal profile] walkietalkie 2014-06-27 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Clementine from The Walking Dead Game here on this journal!
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Zero Kiryuu ♦ Vampire Knight

[personal profile] instrumented 2014-06-27 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Journal/anon enabled HMD is HERE

This really is only a note to those canon familiar, but Zero is from the last chapter of the series, which by then, he's evolved a fair bit since the earlier chapters (ex: much more open about his emotions re Yuuki, for example, and incredibly more self-assured.). If there's anything you feel off about things, please do let me know!

Additionally, he's been in the game since October.
Edited 2014-06-27 23:11 (UTC)
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Soup

[personal profile] zeropoints 2014-06-27 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Tsuna Sawada | Katekyo Hitman REBORN! | [personal profile] zeropoints

here's his HMD if that works better for you!

I've been in the game since April, and I was pretty active (I think) for April and May. but June's the start of summer, so work got really busy for me. sorry I've been so slow! I'm trying to pick it up! ummm and to be honest, I'm really nervous for any crit, but it would be greatly appreciated nonetheless. thank you!
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Kon-El

[personal profile] superissues 2014-06-27 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Kon-El / Superboy || DCU || [personal profile] superissues

My biggest concern right now is my level of involvement in the game! I was very active when I first joined, and then NaNo happened and I rediscovered how much I love writing. Lately, my online time has been skewed in favour of writing. I'm a little afraid that I have been leaving people hanging or making it hard for people to interact with Kon given that it might be a day or two (or longer) between replies. I also have not been tagging out as much because I know I won't have as much time for replies. Please let me know if this is an issue for you!
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Wind

[personal profile] mellowyellow 2014-06-27 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Masaomi Kida // Durarara!! // [personal profile] mellowyellow

He's been in Haven way too long (since the very first event) and has seen some shit. It would be really helpful to know if I'm managing all of this sure-I'm-part-of-Yao-Corp-but-please-please-don't-leave-me craziness well! I'm always worrying about how well I balance his admittedly erratic moods, so any comment on that or anything else would be great too.
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Linds

[personal profile] oralfixations 2014-06-27 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Just little Stiles here! From Teen Wolf of course. My anon enabled HMD is here. I know I'm new but I'm still definitely open to hearing anything!
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[personal profile] braavado 2014-06-27 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Korra | Avatar: The Legend of Korra | [personal profile] braavado


First, let me know if there's any issues with tagging speed/thread-dropping! I've been working on those since they were an issue in the past. I'd also really appreciate feedback on Korra's development, if you have any!
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Lucy

[personal profile] monarchical 2014-06-27 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Sonia Nevermind | Super Dangan Ronpa 2 | [personal profile] monarchical
Ty Lee | Avatar: the Last Airbender | [personal profile] chiblocker
Rapunzel | Tangled | [personal profile] coronae

All three have anon-enabled, screened hmds on their accounts if you prefer (I'll unscreen on request, too) without IP logging or anything.
Edited 2014-06-27 23:18 (UTC)
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Aki

[personal profile] encored 2014-06-27 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Charles Fei-Ong | Blood+ | [personal profile] encored | hmd
Naoi Ayato | Angel Beats! | [personal profile] unjustify | hmd
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Hina

[personal profile] backwordscompatible 2014-06-27 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
→ Zatanna Zatara | Young Justice | [personal profile] backwordscompatible
→ Midii Une | Gundam Wing: Episode Zero | [personal profile] unetrustworthy

I'm probably not as active with either girl as I could be? Mostly because of Haven's size and the nature of the game leading each girl to ultimately stick close to familiar CR. Though I do try to make an effort to branch out to new CR I think would click with either of them. Zatanna, especially, since she's been here for well over a year now and is the social butterfly of the two.
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Vilya

[personal profile] magicisreal 2014-06-27 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Rose Lalonde | Homestuck | [personal profile] magicisreal

I've been here since March and it has been lovely and amazing so far! I have threads I treasure very much.
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Boba

[personal profile] memlost 2014-06-27 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Morgan (male) | [personal profile] memlost | Fire Emblem: Awakening

On hiatus, so apologies for my lack of presence over the past week or two. Both positive and negative crit are very welcome! I also have an anon-enabled HMD here.
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[personal profile] compliant 2014-06-27 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Anri Sonohara | Durarara!! | HMD

I had her in Haven for about a year, from November 2012 to December 2013, and then brought her back in May.
Edited 2014-06-27 23:28 (UTC)
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linlin

[personal profile] foreveraclone 2014-06-27 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
conner kent ([personal profile] foreveraclone) | young justice invasion | private hmd.
teppei kiyoshi ([personal profile] kneed) | kuroko no basuke | private hmd.

i know i've been terribly slow and for that i'd like to apologize! i've kind of been flopping around for the last month or two as far as motivation goes for conner, but, i think i've finally figured out what i need to do to re-motivate myself and get him back into gear! if anyone has any helpful tips/advice for conner (or teppei for that matter) i would love to hear it though! again i'm sorry i've kind of floundered away for the past two months! it is definitely something i am going to be focusing on when i get back from my trip!
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susa

[personal profile] hardhearted 2014-06-27 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
dean winchester | supernatural | [personal profile] hardhearted | hmd

only just apped him in! also been slow with his mingle log tags and for that i apologize.
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[personal profile] compliant 2014-06-27 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I just wanted to leave a quick thanks for continuing to backtag our thread on May's intro log and being patient with my sometimes very slow tags! I know this isn't necessarily useful crit, but from an OOC perspective, it's very appreciated.
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[personal profile] kulak 2014-06-27 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Bucky Barnes | Marvel Cinematic Universe | [personal profile] kulak
David Nolan/Charming | Once Upon A Time | [personal profile] weareboth

with bucky, at his old canon point, i was having a lot of issue getting him the appropriate motivation to be involved in shit and a lot of issue having him, lmao, not just completely walk away in the middle of conversations :'| so that's why i did the cold reset on him and moved him back to 40s bucky, and he's since been a ton of fun to play from there, and a lot easier to toss at people. so just so you guys know, that's what was up with him and why i reset him o7

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