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[havenmods]

It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

For feedback on the characters you play, just post a comment here and other players will respond. Useful things to include in your comment are: character name, canon and how long they've been in Haven, as well as any specific notes you might want feedback on. Although the HMD is not mandatory for this game, it is highly encouraged.

While it's always nice to get praise, try not to spam the meme with 'I LOVE YOU' comments. Leaving positive criticism is definitely allowed, but try to frame it as: 'I like this about the character because of...'. This is the same for constructive criticism; comments of just 'YOU SUCK' help no-body. Try to back up criticism with examples and keep the tone polite. Similarly, when responding to criticism, try not to dismiss it out of hand.

Anonymous is enabled, and if there are any problems then please PM the mod account and they'll be taken care of ASAP.

Comments

MODERATOR AND GAME FEEDBACK

[havenmods]

[eyeofthetiger]

Nothing worthy really of concrit except to say I love how open and responsive you are with questions for the game and staying on top of suggestions and events. It's refreshing and amazing to see in a game this large and fast paced and I think that does deserve a comment.

Thank-you!

[asthegrave]

Mors Ouroborus -> Original

One and a half months in game. I know my activity can be spotty orz. I am enjoying her and her CR though.

[tsundaga]

I have Lightning (tsundaga), Clementine (walkietalkies), the OC James Granier (integrated).

I know Andrea hasn't been around much, I've been having trouble finding things she'd actually go out of her way to respond to, I'm kind of in the process of assessing her fit for this game. So I guess this is mostly about the other three, right now. C:

[hi_no_de]

I wish I could give some indication of how close or far Clem is from canon but obviously I can't because. :| Canon-blind. But I absolutely love how you handle her - she's wise beyond her years without acting older than she is, if that makes sense?

I think you're doing wonderfully. c:

[madamemoiselle]

» Diva, Blood+ @ madamemoiselle (private hmd)
» Lucifer Morningstar, The Sandman @ apostatises (private hmd)

[themainpersonality]

Bruce Banner | The Hulk || Marvel Cinematic Universe || private hmd, anon enabled, screened, no ip logging

Been in the game since November, definitely looking for anything that might help me make sure to capture his voice, since it's still relatively new to me and I'm fairly sure it gets a little shaky.

[hi_no_de]

I think he's great, for what it's worth! (Granted I haven't seen the MCU Incredible Hulk movie and I've only seen the Avengers once.) I loved tagging him with Holly - he was so polite and helpful and I wanted to hug him with every reply I got. And I think that's something canon Hulk brings out in people SO I THINK YOU'RE ON THE RIGHT PATH YEAH!!!

[losteveryone]

Just Carol here!

Carol Peletier | The Walking Dead | losteveryone

[knifedances]

Izaya Orihara | Durarara!!

I've been on hiatus for the last month so I know a lot of people won't have had a chance to interact with Izaya yet, but I'm always open to constructive crit should anyone have any. I have an anon enabled, IP logging off HMD on Izaya's journal should you prefer it.

[kinship]

ALPHONSE ELRIC | Fullmetal Alchemist | snacklist
Al has been in Haven since the very beginning, and has seen a lot of horrible things now. He's trying to make friends with people, but I worry I'm not getting his optimism across as much as I should.

CAIN KNIGHTLORD | Trinity Blood | kinship
Cain has been in Haven for about three months now. He's still trying to find his feet and stay out of the way of the worst violence. Things have got a lot trickier for him since the arrival of Isaak and Helga.

TRES IQUS | Trinity Blood | tres
Tres has been in Haven for about two months now. He's protecting Caterina and generally being a blunt robopriest to everyone. I worry that I don't give enough to work with for him sometimes, as he is quite taciturn.

VASH THE STAMPEDE | Trigun | collateraldamage
Vash just arrived in the last batch of arrivals a week ago. He's not shown much of his serious side yet, but I'm sure it will come out in the events. He's a very new one and sort of an experiment, so the one I'm least confident with.

[hi_no_de]

I haven't tagged against... anyone besides Al (sjfljf) but what I've seen of Tres is hilarious and very to-the-point which is what happens with robots right? (Right????)

And I really love your Al - he's so honestly encouraging and welcoming and friendly! I think the encouragement in particular is a good reflection of his optimism. Like how he was telling Ammy that everything would be okay with being around humans, even though it might not aaactually be is an example of him being optimistic.

POINT IS, I think you're doing really well, especially for having 4 characters on the go wowza

[tamer]

lena here! with—
izumo kamiki (ao no exorcist) @ tamer | hmd
nia teppelin (tengen toppa gurren lagann) @ augural | hmd

SOME KNOWN ISSUES... constantly having to apologize for izumo's prickly/bitchy behavior, and her rather reticent replies. ;n; as for nia, she has just been accepted this past app processing, and i'm still trying to settle back into her voice as it's been a while since i've played her! i'm shooting for a canon review this next weekend, so hopefully i can get a better hold on it soon! :x apologies if she's sounding off or inconsistent. and thanks for the patience, guys! ♥

[waysmarterthanyou]

Even though Izumo can be prickly and curt in her replies I think you do a great job of still giving the other player something to respond to. I never have trouble replying to Izumo tags (unless it's because of me and my own RP problems lmao) and I enjoy threading with her a lot!

[notyourvessel]

I have Sam Winchester here at notyourvessel.

I was on hiatus for a couple weeks there, but I've tried to keep my activity up since I got back. I'm aware that I'm a really slow tagger, but I do try to finish my logs and threads. c:

[themainpersonality]

I haven't had a chance to play with your Sam (which is a shame) and so the only actual crit I could give is more Sam!

That aside, he's really great. I love seeing a Sam that has a full grasp on what he's doing and the character itself. I definitely hope to see him aounr and definitely to get some CR with him (he's only got some with Dean and Castiel so far, and that's been a mess).

[errandry]

I knowwww I've been slow and MIA-ish; it's going to carry on for a bit longer, but I have high hopes for next week and after, so! o9

         mikura kazu ↦ AIR GEAR ↦ errandry
         fai d. fluorite ↦ TSUBASA: RESERVOIR CHRONICLE ↦ warmed

[tamer]

i'm hideously canonblind to kazu, but i wanted to drop a line here to say that i had a lot of fun threading with him! :)

[b00]

❝ aradia megido ( homestuck ) ˛ arrived during the most recent app processing round ❞
➝ anon-enabled hmd

i'm still adjusting to her, so the only matters i'm a bit concerned about are making her voice easily relateable to how she communicates via text in canon, without sounding too awkward, and not being too boring/repetitive, since she has a really straightforward demeanour a good amount of the time.

[redtext]

Aaah I love how she is so far!! She so cute ajsfd

soRRY THIS ISN'T REALLY CRIT IS IT...

[disfavored]

Tarrlok // Legend of Korra // disfavored // Personal HMD with anon on and IP logging off.

[tamer]

your tarrlok will be my favorite forever and 5everrrrr~ i'm sad the potential for cr between our current chars is really slim, but i'm looking forward to any chance i get to thread with him again! :D

[swordedpast]

⚔ Archer ⚔ Fate/stay night ⚔ personal HMD [anonymous enabled, IP logging off] ⚔

⚔ ⚔ I've only just gotten here and threads may be a bit sparse from me for a while due to personal issues, but I'd love to hear any feedback, especially since I'm playing Archer here from the Heaven's Feel route of the game and I'm more used to playing him from Unlimited Blade Works route.

[escapedpandora]

This is Shamera, and I've only got

Hope Estheim (escapedpandora)from Final Fantasy XIII
private HMD

but I'd love love love to know anything at all that you think I can improve on!

[tamer]

CANON BLIND ONCE AGAIN but i adore hope regardless. i've only ever threaded with older!hopes before, so it's neat to see his younger, much more openly fragile self, if that makes any sense. :) i think you handle it well, while still showing a lot of gumption on his side!

[encored]

Charles Fei-Ong (encored) || Blood+ || HMD

[fatal_lancer]

I have Judith from Tales of Vesperia on this account and Anri Sonohara of DRRR!!, compliant.

I'd love crit on Judith, especially, as her voice feels a bit weak to me (haven't had time for a canon review yet, hopefully later this month) and any advice to help shore her up is appreciated. With regards to Anri, I'd love tips on getting an asocial character to better socialise — although anything and everything is appreciated.

They also both have HMDs on their respective journals, if you'd prefer to drop me a line there.

can you tell hmd memes are like christmas to me. can you. can you.

[senile]

hey! your friendly yaoi castmate here!!

judith's one of my favorite vesperia characters, if not tales of in general. she's got a lot of quirks about her that distinguish her from the atypical "busty lancer" role in RPGs. i wish i could say that i've RPed with you enough to see all of them, but we've only just started a thread! :(

from what i have seen, it's a very good start and i'm positive that you'll be a splendid judy long-term. i'm happy to have a castmate in haven (so she can testify for raven being a loony if the situation arises), and def hope you stick around as her.

[deritoto]

Character: Yamamoto Takeshi
Canon: Kateky Hitman Reborn
Time in game: About a month and a half or so.

Yamamoto is actually pretty new to me, and I've been floundering a bit grasping his voice- so any and all feedback and tips would be REALLY appreciated.

And if there's something I'm doing OOCly that's a bother, or something about my writing is off, I'm all ears for that sort of thing too!

[tamer]

sobs another canon i know nothing about but yamamoto is really fun!! ;; from a player's perspective, you can easily read his enthusiasm in his tags, and i appreciate that you always try and give us something to respond to with his tags. :)b

[fatherly]

abel nightroad : trinity blood : fatherly
edward elric : fullmetal alchemist : unerring

please feel free to leave any critique or thoughts you might have on either of my losers whatsoever!! if there's anything you believe could use improving or concerns you might have, don't be shy. i appreciate it!

[ishotyouuu]

Abel - Oh, Abel. Abel, Abel, Abel. It's embarrassing how in love I am with your rendition of his character. I know next to nothing about the canon aside from a few episodes of the anime and a few chapters of the novel, but he's an absolute blast to play off of.

I think my favorite part about him is that despite being very reserved about showing off the other, darker aspects of his character, you never fail to make him interesting and hilarious and three-dimensional despite his apparent shallow, silly personality.

I hope my rambling is at least slightly coherent, but needless to say I adore the way you play him and I'm eagerly looking forward to more CR with you in the future.

[loyalknight]

Diarmuid Ua Duibhne (Lancer) | Fate Zero | loyalknight

He's been in the game siiince October? If I remember correctly. I haven't been as active this past month unfortunately so he doesn't know alot of new people but I'm hoping to pick up on that soon since I love building CR for him!

LUCY

[hexappeal]

Characters played: Zatanna Zatara ✖ DC & Vertigo Comics ✖ hexappeal
Personal HMD link(s): HERE
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Welcomed, just stick around for a conversation!
Other comments? Pull point is 2008. It's prior to the hot mess that is Paul Dini and Bruce Wayne's return. I draw my portrayal from pretty much anyone but Dini and to clarify, I do take her before her incredibly awful and out of character solo series.

I also very recently took a fairly long hiatus and I tend to have low RP drive during work days. As always, if I have dropped anything or I'm going too slow for your liking, please tell me about it! I'll make an extra effort to tag you back in a timely manner! :)

[themainpersonality]

I actually read a little of the comics because of the interactions that Bruce had with her! I think that's always a great sign, and after reading I wanted more CR! Also a great sign, I think.

Amaterasu | Ōkami | 3 weeks

[hi_no_de]

Absolutely any feedback welcome! mo__om

[uninvincible]

Tony Stark ↔ IRON MAN || Marvel Cinematic Universe || private hmd

JUST A NOTE that if Tony seems 'off' lately it's because messing with the phone is having some IC consequences. Just keep that in mind in case you think he's acting slightly funky. :|b

[themainpersonality]

I actually really enjoy the twist that the phones are having on Tony, it's fascinating and quite fun to work off of ! I also though that being the support beam for Bruce post-Hulk shenanigans, was really amazing and I'm glad we were able to have them bro it up, it will definitely make it easier for Bruce to punch him in the face for that picture (he'll let the Other Guy do it!).

Seriously, I love all of the things that we're able to do with the two of them here, and they have the best friendship I've ever RPed and that's because of you, I'm sure!

also... /touches

[birchcore]

» Bethany Hawke | birchcore | Dragon Age 2
» Nathaniel Howe | howeclever | Dragon Age

Bethany has been in Haven since early December! I think I've settled into her voice now. Let me know if you have any feedback or suggestions on how she's doing so far! Nate came in on the last app cycle and I haven't done much with him yet. Also, he is a new muse for me so any critique is welcome.

And in general I have the flu and I haven't been tagging very reliably lately because of it. I'm feeling a little better so that should improve soon.

[mellowyellow]

Masaomi Kida // Durarara!! // mellowyellow

Still around but on hiatus for two weeks for painfully slow tagging speeds.

[waysmarterthanyou]

I only watched literally one ep of Durarara!! but I should note that I watched that one episode because of your Kida and I plan on watching more. He's fun to thread with and thread stalk and I like how you manage to play his goofy/hilarious side while still showing he has lots of depth. Hell, I love how in one thread where he's being kind of silly you can also show that he's hiding some serious shit underneath it all.

Also kudos for portraying his unfunny-ness. As hard as it is playing funny characters I always thought it was kind of difficult to play unfunny ones and make it look like it's the character and not the player failing at being funny. XD