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[havenmods]

It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

For feedback on the characters you play, just post a comment here and other players will respond. Useful things to include in your comment are: character name, canon and how long they've been in Haven, as well as any specific notes you might want feedback on. Although the HMD is not mandatory for this game, it is highly encouraged.

While it's always nice to get praise, try not to spam the meme with 'I LOVE YOU' comments. Leaving positive comments is definitely allowed, but try to frame it as: 'I like this about the character because of...'. This is the same for constructive criticism; comments of just 'YOU SUCK' help no-body. Try to back up criticism with examples and keep the tone polite. Similarly, when responding to criticism, try not to dismiss it out of hand.

Anonymous is enabled, and if there are any problems then please PM the mod account and they'll be taken care of ASAP.

Comments

MOD AND GAME CRIT

[havenmods]

Do you have anything you would like to crit the mods on, or any concerns you have about the game in general? This is the place to leave them!

Blue

[royalhiss]

Sssusssan (OC) royalhiss
NPCs
Plot/Events

Cal

[intendance]

Morgan | Fire Emblem | intendance
March | March Story | xyresic
Nergal | Crepuscule | culpam

[heronpecked]

I wish I had crit for you but I don't! Morgan's mostly who I've played with (although Nergal is already great too, haha, but I'm canon blind there), and she is just fabulous the way you play her. She's a complicated little character, and being able to balance to goof/crackiness with the serious and also the cute must be a huge challenge, but you make it look easy. You get her involved and tag around, and it's always a joy to thread with her. So just keep it up I guess! Because you're fabulous.

Kaye

[silpheed]

Rachel Alucard (silpheed) • BlazBlue
Estellise "Estelle" Sidos Heurassein (storywriter) • Tales of Vesperia

[reignbringer]

Popping in to say that your Estelle is really excellent. Big Team Symphonia Tales game fan, I played Yuri for like a year in another game... Estelle is a tricky balance, I think, but what I've seen from yours is perfect.

Becci

[notsengumi]

Chizuru Yukimura | Hakuouki | notsengumi
Robin | Fire Emblem Awakening | unscriptedfate

Kira

[dragontemptress]

Presa dragontemptress | Tales of Xillia
Toshizo Hijikata criesoverhaikus | Hakuouki
Olivia gracefuldance | Fire Emblem

Jas

[confide]

Mami Tomoe | confide

[kaihentai]

It's been a while since I've watched the Madoka series, but it's been really fun to read tags from your Mami and watch her mental state change in Haven, where everyone is probably just as doomed as she is (at least, in this location as opposed to going back home). I really like the way you've played her, and especially the way she broke down when she found out about grief seeds since in canon we are introduced to her flipping her shit when she finds out, right? In that alternate timeline? It's really interesting to look through her threads with other characters like Homura and Kyoko, who she seems to have kind of rocky relationships with, but still seems to understand in a way. Thank you for all the lovely threads and CR.

aiden

[laceratings]

vincent nightray / pandora hearts / keepitinthefamily
elsa / frozen / icytouch
kuja / final fantasy ix / stagepresence
reyson / fire emblem / heartofahawk

[heronpecked]

AIIIIIDEN hi

No, really, you're amazing. You play all of these wildly different characters, and all of them are fabulous and IC, and interesting, and fun to thread with. You're good at dialogue, at plotting, at pacing, at prose... Vincent is a wonderfully manipulative bastard I enjoy stalking, Elsa is too new for me to comment on but I mean come on she's fabs, Kuja is a sexy beast (AHAHA IT'S A JOKE) and his indifference to things is always hilarious and awful, and Reyson.

Well. You know how much I love Reyson. ♥

Speaking of which WE NEED TO THREAD MORE. I'm kind of waiting for the next event for Things to happen, so let's do all the Things then.

Also stop making that face at my Cecil tags god HE LOVES YOU AND YOUR CHARACTERS WITH PRETTY HAIR don't push his love away!!!!!

Jae

[concentrical]

Nilvana Freire | Crepuscule | concentrical

Jon

[notatool]

Lambda-11 | BlazBlue | notatool

frog

[heronpecked]

Tibarn | Fire Emblem: Radiant Dawn | heronpecked

Cecil Gerswhin Palmer | Welcome to Night Vale | weirdatlast

[aintyourdad]

I'm 100% canonblind on Night Vale, but I loved the thread Joel had with Cecil. He has such a distinct syntax, it was just hilarious to me to see Joel trying to parse through everything. He's a very unique character and you give him a lot of life.

jenn

[evangelic]

Kaworu Nagisa • Neon Genesis Evangelion • evangelic

lena

[tamer]

izumo kamiki — ao no exorcist — tamer — (hmd)
→ izumo's been in haven for one year, three months

izumi miyamura — horimiya — miyamura — (hmd)
→ this january 20 marks miyamura's one year anniversary!

riruka dokugamine — bleach — achoo — (hmd)
→ riruka is the newest of the bunch, at only two months

Skye

[bulletballet]

Noel Vermillion | BlazBlue | bulletballet

Al

[borntochoose]

Clark Kent | Man of Steel | borntochoose | HMD in his journal

My first HMD so go wildddd

[weirdatlast]

ahhhh, I love your Clark! He's such a good balance of Clark and supes, of adorable and capable, and it must be tough because he doesn't have any easy voice with a lot of buzz words or random death metaphors all the time. (.....) But you still manage to pull his tags off as really identifiably Clark, and that's.... oh no I'm going to say it

super impressive

I am so sorry.

linlin

[anikiiiiiii]

Conner Kent (foreveraclone) • Young Justice ▶ private hmd
Ryuuji Suguro (celibacy) • Ao no Exorcist ▶ private hmd
Kiyotaka Ishimaru (anikiiiiiii) • Dangan Ronpa ▶ private hmd

[insentient]

Vergil | DMC Devil May Cry | insentient | Private HMD

alice

[shotsfired]

(shotsfired) MAKOTO NAEGI / dangan ronpa

[weirdatlast]

I know you just got here and I am canon blind, but Naegi is adorable. That scream. It's a pleasure to tag with him, and you keep things descriptive without bearing tags down, and interesting and moving forward, which is always a challenge. So yes obviously I'm looking forward to future wacky hijinks, roomie!

laura

[allweather]

loser nerd ➨ pandora hearts ➨ since june 2013 ➨ allweather
count d ➨ petshop of horrors ➨ since december 2013 ➨ pruning

[weirdatlast]

Wow I love both your loser nerd and your plant freak. I actually didn't like Reim at all (o o p s) in the canon, but you've made me love him?? And his serious stuffiness. You play the straight man in the world of weirdos so well. And D is a fabulous bastard of course. Your characterization is perfect to what I remember reading back when people read manga in book form instead of on these new fangled touch screenamagigs, and he is sassy but refined and cold but still approachable. That's... a lot of really complicated characteristics to pull off, but you manage it in only a handful of phrases in each tag, and it's brilliant.

So yes obvs keep on keeping on because you're perf

Bun

[tofus]

Rise Kujikawa | Persona 4 | tofus

Rise is still a very new character for me and this is my first game with her, so anything would be appreciated.

Metin

[theshiningone]

Hiro Kageyama | theshiningone | Devil Survivor 2

Li

[antiapocalypse]

Buffy Summers | Buffy: The Vampire Slayer | just_a_girl
Thor Odinson | Marvel Cinematic Universe | reignbringer

[aintyourdad]

I'm relatively canon blind for Buffy - I've seen maybe two or three whole episodes - but one thing I noticed in our thread is how well you have the cadence and rhythms of her speech down. I heard her very well in every tag you gave me and it made that thread super, super fun! I'm really looking forward to doing more threads with these two.

Yaywon

[notvessalius]

Oz Vessalius (notvessalius) Pandora Hearts
Lenalee Lee (bootstomp) D.Gray-man
Solomon Goldsmith (chevanot) Blood+

[weirdatlast]

These three! //// I love the way you play your characters. Oz is such a cute brat (although I haven't threaded with him much, oops, I need a girl character...), LENALEE you should know my feelings on already... I love DGM and your Lenalee is so perfectly in character, it makes me forget I'm RPing sometimes and not just reading manga. I still feel bad for her though! She needs a vacation. THERE'S YOUR CRIT BE NICER TO POOR LENALEE GOD

And Solomon ahahahahahahaha

That's all.

No seriously, I haven't threaded much with him and I don't know the canon, but of course I love our thread already and am looking forward to more.

So yes your crit is be nicer to poor Lenalee and also don't ever stop.

freshy

[rettangolo]

rohan kishibe | bookface | JJBA: Diamond is Unbreakable
gyro zeppeli | rettangolo | JJBA: Steel Ball Run

Both have anon-enabled HMDs in their journals! Any and all crit is loved and appreciated, thank you in advance. ♥

Vycey

[shizzy]

Shizuo Heiwajima | Durarara!! | shizzy