HMD

[havenmods]

It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

For feedback on the characters you play, just post a comment here and other players will respond. Useful things to include in your comment are: character name, canon and how long they've been in Haven, as well as any specific notes you might want feedback on. Although the HMD is not mandatory for this game, it is highly encouraged.

While it's always nice to get praise, try not to spam the meme with 'I LOVE YOU' comments. Leaving positive criticism is definitely allowed, but try to frame it as: 'I like this about the character because of...'. This is the same for constructive criticism; comments of just 'YOU SUCK' help no-body. Try to back up criticism with examples and keep the tone polite. Similarly, when responding to criticism, try not to dismiss it out of hand.

Anonymous is enabled, and if there are any problems then please PM the mod account and they'll be taken care of ASAP.

Comments

[allwehad]

Margot Sullivan || Original || allwehad

Also been here since the start of the game.

Things I'd like to work on:

>> Tagging out more
>> Fight scenes because I'm terrible at them and know it, lmao.

All crit is welcome! There's also an HMD post that you can respond to any time over here in her journal.

[snacklist]

I hate you forever.

No, seriously, I love Margot. She's one of the best OCs I've seen, you've obviously put so much work into her world and background. She's believable for it, with flaws and pitfalls, as well as cool Weaver powers.

[ishotyouuu]

I love Margot so much. She's an awesomely well-rounded OC, and bouncing Wade off of her is a lot of fun. XD

I know we've only had one fight scene (only one encounter, really), but I think you did really well for someone who's "terrible" at them, and I wouldn't mind having Wade tangle with her again.

...After he apologizes for assaulting her the first time, that is. Maybe. If she's lucky.

[allwehad]

THANK YOU. <3

Ahaha I think my problem is I overthink them and I sit there going, "OH GOD IS THAT POSSIBLE? WAIT WHAT WOULD THAT LOOK LIKE? CAN YOU EVEN -- AFLASHFASF." I do want to write them more to try to peddle through that until I feel comfortable with them. XD

I also have been dying for more Wade and Margot interaction, like you have no idea. Their single encounter was so much fun and I just want them to be snarky and fight with each other forever. /chin hands