HMD

[havenmods]

It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

For feedback on the characters you play, just post a comment here and other players will respond. Useful things to include in your comment are: character name, canon and how long they've been in Haven, as well as any specific notes you might want feedback on. Although the HMD is not mandatory for this game, it is highly encouraged.

While it's always nice to get praise, try not to spam the meme with 'I LOVE YOU' comments. Leaving positive criticism is definitely allowed, but try to frame it as: 'I like this about the character because of...'. This is the same for constructive criticism; comments of just 'YOU SUCK' help no-body. Try to back up criticism with examples and keep the tone polite. Similarly, when responding to criticism, try not to dismiss it out of hand.

Anonymous is enabled, and if there are any problems then please PM the mod account and they'll be taken care of ASAP.

Comments

MODERATOR AND GAME FEEDBACK

[havenmods]

Re: MODERATOR AND GAME FEEDBACK

[lets_stay_together]

Can I just say how much I love being in a game where the mods seem to be actually interested in what's going on?

'Cause yeah, your NPC posts are amazing, you actually tag everybody back (And really fast too), and the plot is really intriguing so far.

I also just spent the last five minutes trying to come up with something to criticize you about, just so this wouldn't be an 'I LOVE YOU' comment, but I've got nothing. Great job you guys!

[excon]

Faith Lehane -> Buffy the Vampire Slayer -> excon

She's been in game since the start. I always feel shaky on her voice so any crit is appreciated.

[snacklist]

I can hear Faith in all your tags, and would love CR with her. But maybe keep more of a balance in mind between mod duties and player tags, I'm sure nobody will begrudge you taking some time to have fun too.

[knifedances]

Izaya Orihara | Durarara!! | knifedances

He has anon enabled, IP logging off HMD on his journal if you prefer. Constructive crit is always welcomed seeing as this guy gives me such a headache half the time.

[snacklist]

I don't know the canon at all, so I can't give you character crit. However, the detail and thought in your tags is always evident, which makes him a joy to play off.

[snacklist]

Alphonse Elric | Fullmetal Alchemist | snacklist
Cain Knightlord | Trinity Blood | kinship

Hit me with anything!

[tellittothefrogs]

I can literally hear your Alphonse in my head, and I don't think I've ever come across anyone who had his voice down more. Just so you know.


....I guess you posted for Prince so! ediiiiits

POSTING FOR PRINCE DUE TO HIATUS

[snacklist]

Edward Elric | Fullmetal Alchemist | unerring

[tsundaga]

LIGHTNING FARRON (tsundaga) from Final Fantasy XIII.

[transferedfate]

Lightning sounds just lovely! I love Final Fantasy XIII, and Lightning seems like she'd be a hard character to play, but you play her well. I love how you're very deliberate with everything that she says-- Light is a person who doesn't talk more than she needs to, and you do that but still keep her tags sharp and interesting.

[stillplaying]

Katniis Everdeen | The Hunger Games | stillplaying

[echokinetic]

Sasha Morden | Original |echokinetic | Since game opened

Kenzi | Lost Girl | sawyourwolfjunk | Since game opened

Damon Salvatore | The Vampire Diaries | dickwithfangs | Less than a week

I know I missed the first big event and I'm totally bummed about that, but I'm getting back into the swing of things and hopefully have been doing all right with character interactions.

Concrit on both Kenzi and Damon's voices are welcome, and if anyone has any suggestions re: Sasha, feel free to drop them.

[survivingvalkyrie]

Claire Redfield || Resident Evil || survivingvalkyrie

She's been in the game since a week or so after the beginning.

>> Honestly I'm just worried I'm too bland with her. I've not played her in... s-seven years, so I'm always scared I'm messing her up.

[tellittothefrogs]

So far I think your voice for Claire is wonderful. She is the perfect mix of sweet and firey, not bland in my opinion at all.

Her punching Jake and being all 'ow are you made of metal?' then 'I want my knife back' was just. So very Claire to me. ♥

[tellittothefrogs]

Carl Grimes | The Walking Dead

[theleader]

You're the best okay? I don't know what else to tell you.

Carl is perfect. You have him nailed down, and I don't think I could stand to see myself play off of anyone else's.

/loves

[coping]

Baby Doll | Sucker Punch

Just her, and I'm still new, but she has anon enable and screened HMD on her journal.

[forgatmigej]

Holly Summers | No More Heroes | forgatmigej

Sheeee's been in the game since October 13th, I think...? So since about the 2nd/3rd week?

There's an HMD on her journal if you prefer to comment there! Concrit is totally encouraged since this is my first time playing her for a prolonged amount of time. also sorry I'm such a slow tagger sljfjsf schoolwork and stuff /)_(\

[wwand]

Eridan Ampora ˛ Homestuck ˛ wwand

my activity is actually the worst thing in existence i'm sORRY

[ishotyouuu]

Wade's interactions with Eridan have been frustrating, infuriating, and utterly hilarious. Like I've said before, I've never laughed so hard during a thread as I have when I'm interacting with your Eridan.

You've captured his pathetic snootiness flawlessly, and it's always such a blast to bounce one snarky asshole off of another. Keep on doing what you're doing, dude. You're doing great at it.

[theleader]

Rick Grimes | The Walking Dead | theleader

I'm just sort of getting into the game, and it's been sort of slow going for me, but I'd appreciate any feed back you might have.

[tellittothefrogs]

Boomeranging you back with some love!

I love love Rick's voice. The way he addresses people, his accent, everything. The best example being our most recent thread with the NPC. He just sounds so very right in my head, he does that pausing pondering thing he does perfectly no other way to explain that.

Best Rick I could ask for, seriously.

[thebeastwithout]

Beast Boy | Teen Titans | thebeastwithout

I've only just joined last week but any crit so far would be awesome!

[ishotyouuu]

I've only watched a few Teen Titans episodes, but I can still hear BB's voice in my head when I read your posts. I think you've captured his tone and little nuances perfectly.

[mellowyellow]

Masaomi Kida // Durarara!! // mellowyellow

He's been around just shy of a month and has tried to liven up the party ever since. If your characters are laughing out of anything other than pity, I'm doing it wrong.

[snacklist]

I don't know the canon at all, but Kida's tags leave me chuckling every time. He's exceptionally interesting to play off and I adore the CR we have.

[shadowflower]

Marianna "Monts" Medina | Original Character | shadowflower

I've only been here for about a week, but I'll definitely go and tag out more! I'm enjoying this game and the other characters very much c:

[allwehad]

Margot Sullivan || Original || allwehad

Also been here since the start of the game.

Things I'd like to work on:

>> Tagging out more
>> Fight scenes because I'm terrible at them and know it, lmao.

All crit is welcome! There's also an HMD post that you can respond to any time over here in her journal.

[snacklist]

I hate you forever.

No, seriously, I love Margot. She's one of the best OCs I've seen, you've obviously put so much work into her world and background. She's believable for it, with flaws and pitfalls, as well as cool Weaver powers.

[scytheyouout]

Soul Eater Evans | Soul Eater | scytheyouout

Soul's only been here for a couple of weeks so he hasn't done a hell of a lot yet.

[transferedfate]

Ringo Oginome | transferedfate

Ringo is still a fairly new character for me! While I love and adore her to pieces, love and ICness are not always one in the same, you know? Especially considering Ringo is a character with so many different emotions, making sure that she's showing the right emotions at the right time is crucial. So! If you happen to know her canon and you have any thoughts on how I've been playing here, please lay said thoughts on me!

I also have an anon enabled hmd over at her journal, if you're more comfortable leaving crit there.

[ishotyouuu]

Wade "Deadpool" Wilson | Deadpool | ishotyouuu

Wade's been in the game since it opened. Any concrit is appreciated since I sometimes worry I don't have his voice quite right. There's also a HMD post on his journal if you prefer, which is anon-enabled and screened.

[snacklist]

It's been a long time since I read anything with Deadpool in, but reading your tags brings it back to me. You're fantabulous.

[freelancing]

Jake Muller | Resident Evil | freelancing

I've not been in a game for years and I feel like it shows. Any crit or advice you might have would be welcome.

Jake came in on October 19th and my main concern with him is his characterization.

[tellittothefrogs]

It definitely doesn't show to me, and I think you have his voice down so well it's almost scary ahaha. If he wasn't a brand new character, I would have guessed you'd been playing him for years.

[posturing]

Korra | posturing

My biggest concern is that I'm relatively new to the character and the cadence of her voice suffers for it. Especially considering that she's from a point in time where she is coming off of a traumatic experience only to fall into an entirely new one.

[motorvate]

I'm really glad you apped! When our Korra dropped, I was worried about playing Asami because.. idk I just didn't feel too comfortable playing her without a Korra, and yours is so good and you tag back so fast ;u; I'm glad to have you with us in our quaint little cast and I feel like you're doing fabulously so far. I look forward to strengthening Korra and Asami's relationship since they aren't too super close at their respective canon points!

[arsenicandlace]

Dahlia Hawthorne | Ace Attorney | arsenicandlace

I'm new to her so... ;; apologies for any voice issues.

Mako | Legend of Korra | firethepolice

This is my first time playing Mako straight from canon and my first time striking out in a game like this. Apologies for roughness with his voice as well.

I also have a permanent hmd post in Mako's journal, if you must catch me between hmds.

[transferedfate]

Oh wow, this is your first time playing Dahlia? You're doing so well! I haven't had a chance to tag you yet, but I've been watching Dahlia's post, and you're doing an excellent job. Everything in brackets is spot on, and I'm so excited to stalk her further! And it's your fault that I'm looking at my old Iris journal and thinking about dusting it off...

So yes, I haven't had a chance to stalk Mako much, but I just wanted to let you know I think you're doing splendidly.

[aintnoconvict]

Glitch | Tin Man | aintnoconvict | private HMD | In the game since opening day.

KNOWN ISSUES: the past couple weeks I've been slow and spacey, sorry. Never ever hesitate to kick me in the rear for tags!

[ishotyouuu]

Glitch was another character that I was excited to see in this game, and you definitely brought him to life here. I think my favorite thing is that you've captured all of his nuances perfectly-- the twitchiness, the stuttering, basically all the mannerisms that make him who he is.

I can honestly say I never expected to be punched in the feels as much as I have with our interactions, but you managed to pull that off in a painfully awesome way, just by your amazing portrayal of such a complex character. I can't wait to see which direction our characters end up going in this game.