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Haven Mods ([personal profile] havenmods) wrote in [community profile] havenooc2012-11-09 11:54 pm
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HMD


It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

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[personal profile] freelancing 2012-11-10 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Jake Muller | Resident Evil | [personal profile] freelancing

I've not been in a game for years and I feel like it shows. Any crit or advice you might have would be welcome.

Jake came in on October 19th and my main concern with him is his characterization.
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[personal profile] tellittothefrogs 2012-11-10 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
It definitely doesn't show to me, and I think you have his voice down so well it's almost scary ahaha. If he wasn't a brand new character, I would have guessed you'd been playing him for years.

[personal profile] survivingvalkyrie 2012-11-11 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
I can't say enough about your Jake. I wish I'd get to play with him more. I was actually most impressed with him in the hospital, not saying the rest isn't fantastic but that little bit we got to play with him there he just.. your personification became a favorite of mine.