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Haven Mods ([personal profile] havenmods) wrote in [community profile] havenooc2012-11-09 11:54 pm
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HMD


It's time for the HMD, Havenites.

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posturing: ☸ narben (Makes me dizzy)

[personal profile] posturing 2012-11-10 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Korra | [personal profile] posturing

My biggest concern is that I'm relatively new to the character and the cadence of her voice suffers for it. Especially considering that she's from a point in time where she is coming off of a traumatic experience only to fall into an entirely new one.
motorvate: (fifty-seven)

[personal profile] motorvate 2012-11-10 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
I'm really glad you apped! When our Korra dropped, I was worried about playing Asami because.. idk I just didn't feel too comfortable playing her without a Korra, and yours is so good and you tag back so fast ;u; I'm glad to have you with us in our quaint little cast and I feel like you're doing fabulously so far. I look forward to strengthening Korra and Asami's relationship since they aren't too super close at their respective canon points!
posturing: ☸ togekiss (They wanna bank up)

[personal profile] posturing 2012-11-10 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you .////. I know I have trouble writing Korra being anxious and not coming off as dickish -- SO SORRY, ASAMI IF KORRA COMES OFF AS A JERK Really I'm loving the impending CR that I'm wriggling in my chair
disfavored: (conniving)

[personal profile] disfavored 2012-11-10 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
you tried






No really though, I'm enjoying your Korra a lot so far. She seems like she'd be difficult to play, with having to balance her DEAL WITH IT attitude while also being insecure about being a good Avatar. But you're doin good.
posturing: ☸ togekiss (Take alot more than you)

[personal profile] posturing 2012-11-10 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
That is all kinds of wrong coming from Tarrlok
disfavored: (aw yeah swag)

[personal profile] disfavored 2012-11-10 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not actually Tarrlok IRL ok



maybe
posturing: ☸ togekiss (The fuck you gonna do)

[personal profile] posturing 2012-11-10 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
AMON TO YOU